Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?

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Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in people believing that Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries which has large impact on government and individuals. There are a number of factors accountable for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken.

There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to racialism which has a great impact on humans and their lives. Not only Xenophobia can lead to mental stress, but it can also effect the inner peace of mankind. Needless to say, all the demerits have far-reaching impact on socialism and equality between different cultures of our country.

Steps to deal with this problem are many; the most effective one are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that government must implement strict laws to take action again such issues and all individuals must be taught lessons of equality and color. Only when convergent efforts from all sectors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable progress in curbing the problem.

To conclude, dealing with Xenophobia is one of the most prevalent problems that faces in all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, concrete steps as mentioned above can strengthen the fight against and alleviate the growing concern. Its potential impact is too dire to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
...ctors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable progress in curbing the problem. To conclude,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11522633745 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77969450713 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5636304599 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155412196872 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453571918503 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05526082579 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919523266903 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504710126422 0.0609392437508 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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