help!

Submitted by Aisha_98 on Tue, 02/12/2019 - 15:44

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please, can anyone review my task one and give me feedback and a score, I don't know why I got 1.1 vote.

1. You need to put more content:

'More content wanted. Minimum 150 words wanted.'

2. the topic is about 'a university lecturer', so inside the content, there should be words about 'a university lecturer', but you don't have those words, so the warning messages are coming up:

'It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.'