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The line chart compares and contrasts datas in how many passengers pay for Underground Station in London from 6:00 to 22:00 per day. The number of passengers fluctuates flexibly during a day.

The busiest time of a day is at 8:00 when the number of passengers go up to 400. At 18:00, it’s also crowded with about 375 people going by subway. The consecutive period from 12:00 to 14:00 has increased slightly the numbers of passengers between 280 and 300. But then, it drops remarkably to 100 which is the lowest number of people going by subway. As can be seen from the chart, the early time at 6:00 also has the same lowest number with only 100 passengers.

People who go subway in London hardly choose those special times like early in the morning or late in the evening. The morning of the station just starts with 100 passengers and ends at 22:00 with under 150 passengers.

Above all, the number of passengers depends much on the time. People are likely to choose official time to go faster.