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I checked out the essay and found out a lot of warning messages, like:

Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
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difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
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In life we can lack music. Music is a source of happiness for us, this life will be very boring if haven’t music. Music helps us funnier when we sad and share joy with us. Every time we listen to music, we see how valuable this life is.
It is interesting to hear when we learning, especially when we are stressed. If you like listening to English music, you can also learn English. I think those who like listening to music are a good and interesting hobby.