Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities

In nowadays societies, there are many unsolvable problems that need much effort rather than just governments. Many believe that participating in such problems has become less interesting for youngsters, but some individuals have the opposite opinion and believe that many young people are taking part to solve these problems. In my point of view, the participation of youngsters to help societies are much more than a decade ago because they are more knowledgeable, more careful and more social groups have been founded. Also, their spare time has increased.

The first aspect to point out is that the rate of education has increased in comparison to a decade. More educated persons, is synonymous to more knowledgeable people. If the people become aware of the problem in a community, they will put much effort to resolve a problem. Environmental conservation groups that contain a lot of youngsters can exemplify that the more people are educated, the more they concern about what is going on their environment.

Apart from the point I made above, one cannot overlook is the fact that many social groups have been founded recently. These groups are more than ever before. For instance, the groups that are defeating human rights have grown.

Another point deserving some words here is that the spare time of youngsters has increased. The facilities that are used widely, gives the chance to have much more time to think about our societies. In past, people confronted with very common problem that take much of their time, so they rise above their communities problems. However, nowadays young people have much time to come up against problems.

In a word owing to above aforementioned reasonable causes and elucidations described in previous paragraphs, it appears to be good to draw the well founded conclusion that youngsters have taken part in societies' problems more than ever before since they are more educated and have much more free time. Also, the increasing social groups, is another evidence.

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Sentence: In past, people confronted with very common problem that take much of their time, so they rise above their communities problems.
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