Do you agree or disagree with the statement that people who learn many different skills are more successful than those who focus on only one skill.
It is well recognized that mastering skill is a must on the road to success. However, when it comes to how many skills one should grasp, opinions vary from person to person. To be frank, I incline to the view that people who focus on only one skill are much closer to success and my reasons are as follows.
First of all, how successful you will be in the future depends on how skillful you are today, that's to say, the degree of proficiency outweighs the quantity of skills that you have acquired. It has been said that everyone lives by selling something. In the light of this statement, teacher...
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Sentence: In short, only when your whole mind concentrate on one skill, could you hear the success calling you.
Description: The fragment mind concentrate on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace concentrate with verb, past participle
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence Length SD: 12.49 7.5
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