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ok! you said in one of the
ok! you said in one of the answers whenever I explain any of my reasons , I should put an exclusion in the end and that is why I used if ..what alternatives should I use ?? like in this speech I needed to use it
Since the first sentence is
Since the first sentence is 'if' clause, we don't need to make any if conditions again, which will duplicate the content.
what you do:
1. remove that if clause
2. make one more sentence
The conclusion == advantages of the reason
for example, in the first reason, we may say : ... my friend will get whatever books she wants for sure (advantage 1); and the books will enrich her knowledge about my country's customs, cultures, histories ...(advantage 2)
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two issues:
1. there are duplicated contents, like: 'if my friends....', 'so taking my friends there...'
better not to make 'if' clauses in speaking.
2. you only talk in 43 seconds. need to talk more.