- TPO 28 - Question 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To protect the health of young children, advertisements for candy and junk food should not be shown on television. Use specific reasons and details in your response. 83
- TPO 07 - Question 6 60
- TPO 03 - Question 1 What characteristics do you think make someone a good parent? Explain why these characteristics are important to you. 80
- TPO 22 - Question 5
- TPO 45 - Question 4 80
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1. need to remove one sentence from reason one. it is too long.
2. remove the sentence from reason two: 'for example, when....' it is extra.
correct time pattern:
introduction: 5 seconds ( need to remove 'in my point of view'. we can simply say: It is a bad idea.)
reason one: 20 seconds
reason two: 20 seconds