TPO 45 - Question 1 Which of the following qualities do you think is most important for a university student to be successful?●Highly motivated●Hard working●IntelligentChoose one of these qualities and explain why it is important.
still there are issues with the second reason. 'better job opportunities' is the result of hard working, not the quality for hard working students. The topic is: what is the most important quality for a university success? so the second reason should be something like this:
second, hard working students have deeper understandings on the knowledge. (why?) while some students are hanging out and enjoying the bars, parties, movies, theaters, hard working students are working on libraries, projects, assignments... (what are the advantages). At the end, they will get better scores, and will get better job opportunities.
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still there are issues with the second reason. 'better job opportunities' is the result of hard working, not the quality for hard working students. The topic is: what is the most important quality for a university success? so the second reason should be something like this:
second, hard working students have deeper understandings on the knowledge. (why?) while some students are hanging out and enjoying the bars, parties, movies, theaters, hard working students are working on libraries, projects, assignments... (what are the advantages). At the end, they will get better scores, and will get better job opportunities.