No serious flaws found. The next step for you to practice is to give more content.
High marks = good content + more content + fluency.
'good content' and 'fluency' are not big issues for you now.
'more content' means to speak relatively faster.
'more content' also means the duration of the speech should be 45 seconds. Currently it is only: 43.73 seconds for this speaking. people normally can talk 4-5 words in one second.
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No serious flaws found. The next step for you to practice is to give more content.
High marks = good content + more content + fluency.
'good content' and 'fluency' are not big issues for you now.
'more content' means to speak relatively faster.
'more content' also means the duration of the speech should be 45 seconds. Currently it is only: 43.73 seconds for this speaking. people normally can talk 4-5 words in one second.