getting advise from a friend and family or from personal experience ,which one do you prefer and why?

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 607.0 444.711560045 136% => OK
No of words: 151.0 116.580246914 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01986754967 3.81502700369 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.28032121604 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29733562542 1.8723322822 123% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 76.076318743 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649006622517 0.655143326166 99% => OK
Syllable count: 196.2 141.574747475 139% => OK
Avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.21358024691 107% => OK

Performance on coherence:
Topic speech coherence ratio: 0.0309808407834 0.0738818816272 42% => It may have issues on recording quality or the content is not so closely related to content.

Acoustic performance on paragraphs:
How many acoustic paragraphs: 3.0 3.20202020202 94% => OK
Average paragraph length: 50.3333333333 60.3232687746 83% => OK
STD paragraph length: 10.1434160365 17.3634065801 58% => OK
Average paragraph duration: 15.1633333333 22.9064221017 66% => OK
STD paragraph duration: 3.81972366656 6.49597621602 59% => OK

Acoustic performance on sentences:
How many acoustic sentences: 19.0 31.1548821549 61% => OK
Average acoustic sentence length: 7.94736842105 4.0588447711 196% => OK
STD acoustic sentence length: 7.25819815403 3.18357895611 228% => The length of acoustic sentences changes so often.
Average acoustic sentences duration: 2.29368421053 1.46810986539 156% => OK
STD acoustic sentences duration: 2.00498644313 1.01537252472 197% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic silence:(An acoustic silence means a little pause between two or more words)
How many acoustic silence: 20.0 28.6644219978 70% => OK
Total acoustic silence duration: 2.7 5.28593714927 51% => OK
Average acoustic silence duration: 0.135 0.187982170178 72% => Maybe the speech rate is too fast.
STD acoustic silence duration: 0.118638105177 0.154715141812 77% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic words:
Total word duration: 39.19 35.408047138 111% => OK
Average word duration: 0.259536423841 0.306236595465 85% => OK
STD word duration: 0.158875759483 0.198589292138 80% => OK

Disfluencies: like hesitations, or 'ehn' or taking a long time to pronounce a word:
How many disfluencies: 5.0 6.3164983165 79% => OK
Total_disfluencies_duration: 3.83 5.14435465769 74% => OK
Total acoustic noise duration: 1.84 2.80480359147 66% => OK

Acoustic rates:
Total speech duration: 45.49 45.0716498316 101% => OK
Compare to expected duration: 1.01088888889 1.00159221848 101% => OK
Rate of silence: 0.439657067487 0.637764685501 69% => OK
Rate of speech: 3.31941085953 2.58495923209 128% => OK
Rate of speech by unique words: 2.15431963069 1.68816559523 128% => OK
Rate of word duration by unique words: 2.50063791784 2.15290372801 116% => OK
Average articulation rates: 0.483930966887 0.343871460585 141% => OK

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It may have duplicated content. Need to use the words more efficiently.

Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by speech e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the speech e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas.