Some people attracted to jobs that include a great deal of travel. Other peopleprefer jobs that allow them to return to their homes every evening. Which type of  job opportunity would you prefer and why? 

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 462.0 444.711560045 104% => OK
No of words: 126.0 116.580246914 108% => OK
Chars per words: 3.66666666667 3.81502700369 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.28032121604 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.77281052086 1.8723322822 95% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 76.076318743 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65873015873 0.655143326166 101% => OK
Syllable count: 155.7 141.574747475 110% => OK
Avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.21358024691 99% => OK

Performance on coherence:
Topic speech coherence ratio: 0.0 0.0738818816272 0% => It may have issues on recording quality or the content is not so closely related to content.

Acoustic performance on paragraphs:
How many acoustic paragraphs: 2.0 3.20202020202 62% => OK
Average paragraph length: 63.0 60.3232687746 104% => OK
STD paragraph length: 15.0 17.3634065801 86% => OK
Average paragraph duration: 23.19 22.9064221017 101% => OK
STD paragraph duration: 4.48 6.49597621602 69% => OK

Acoustic performance on sentences:
How many acoustic sentences: 27.0 31.1548821549 87% => OK
Average acoustic sentence length: 4.66666666667 4.0588447711 115% => OK
STD acoustic sentence length: 3.73174569417 3.18357895611 117% => OK
Average acoustic sentences duration: 1.66111111111 1.46810986539 113% => OK
STD acoustic sentences duration: 1.16037456703 1.01537252472 114% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic silence:(An acoustic silence means a little pause between two or more words)
How many acoustic silence: 23.0 28.6644219978 80% => OK
Total acoustic silence duration: 3.63 5.28593714927 69% => OK
Average acoustic silence duration: 0.157826086957 0.187982170178 84% => OK
STD acoustic silence duration: 0.13856270035 0.154715141812 90% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic words:
Total word duration: 39.25 35.408047138 111% => OK
Average word duration: 0.311507936508 0.306236595465 102% => OK
STD word duration: 0.16288114013 0.198589292138 82% => OK

Disfluencies: like hesitations, or 'ehn' or taking a long time to pronounce a word:
How many disfluencies: 7.0 6.3164983165 111% => OK
Total_disfluencies_duration: 5.07 5.14435465769 99% => OK
Total acoustic noise duration: 1.96 2.80480359147 70% => OK

Acoustic rates:
Total speech duration: 46.38 45.0716498316 103% => Need to finish the speech on time.
Compare to expected duration: 1.03066666667 1.00159221848 103% => OK
Rate of silence: 0.495903406641 0.637764685501 78% => OK
Rate of speech: 2.71668822768 2.58495923209 105% => OK
Rate of speech by unique words: 1.78956446744 1.68816559523 106% => OK
Rate of word duration by unique words: 2.11464968153 2.15290372801 98% => OK
Average articulation rates: 0.304969357143 0.343871460585 89% => OK

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Maybe the speech is too long. It should be in 45 seconds.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by speech e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the speech e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas.

20 in 30

some 'ehn' in the speech. You may record it again, before recording, listen to this one some times and try to figure out the issues in the speech. Don't make same mistakes again in the new recording.

Don't record a lot of times, this time is just for analysis purpose. and slowly you can get rid of the second recording and just need to record one time.
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In the future practice, use the simplest pattern:

first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5-10 seconds

First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + example 1 // about 15-20 seconds

Second, reason 2 (1 sentence) + example 2. // about 15-20 seconds
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it means after the topic sentence, immediately give an example. don't need to develop. so you can speak more fluently. and then let's see the result.