The introduction takes too much time. It should be in 15 seconds, like:
The writer proposes that the students should be allowed to go into the movie collection area because this will make it easier for students to choose and university will have no need to pay extra staff. However, the man in the conversation thinks this is a bad proposal.
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The introduction takes too much time. It should be in 15 seconds, like:
The writer proposes that the students should be allowed to go into the movie collection area because this will make it easier for students to choose and university will have no need to pay extra staff. However, the man in the conversation thinks this is a bad proposal.
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