The reason one is wrong. Since you accept the first solution, it should not argue against the first solution, instead, need to support writing a five page paper, like:
she did mention in the conversation that she has plenty of ideas, and she’s confident she’ll be able to do a good job for writing the paper.
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If the first argument is developed correctly, this speech is a perfect one and can reach 29-30.
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The reason one is wrong. Since you accept the first solution, it should not argue against the first solution, instead, need to support writing a five page paper, like:
she did mention in the conversation that she has plenty of ideas, and she’s confident she’ll be able to do a good job for writing the paper.
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If the first argument is developed correctly, this speech is a perfect one and can reach 29-30.