Don't make new content. from 53' to 60', it is something new:
'that will bring more business to the franchiser...'
should be:
For example, the pizza restaurant you open has the same name as the others’. People already know the name and they’ll go to your restaurant because they trust the name and think they will definitely have good experience.
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Don't extend the content. We talk what we heard.
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Don't make new content. from 53' to 60', it is something new:
'that will bring more business to the franchiser...'
should be:
For example, the pizza restaurant you open has the same name as the others’. People already know the name and they’ll go to your restaurant because they trust the name and think they will definitely have good experience.
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Don't extend the content. We talk what we heard.