The plot shows the annual number of restaurant visits for the same types of food between 1965 and 2015.
In terms of the annual visits, the Indian food was still the least popular over the period, though the number of visits climbed from o to over 10. The trend of annual visits for the Chineses food and the Indian food are more complicated. Starting at a relatively higher point (around 4 visits), the figure for Chinese food remained unchanged in the first decade and then increased at a rapid rate to around 14 by 1995 and more than 20 in 2010. The number of annual visits for the Italian food rose rapidly at the beginning, ranging from about 3 in 1970 to approximately 14 in 1995, and then increased progressively by smaller amounts, reaching 15 by 2010.
flaws:
No. of Words: 118 200
Minimum 150 words wanted
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4
Minimum three paragraphs wanted
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The best strategy to practice task I:
Step 1, Take about 10 minutes to read one essay by one of the following users:
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or any other sample essays.
in this step, try to analyze how they develop essays, and even try to remember the words, phrases, and sentences they used in the essays.
Step 2, Write the essay in 20 minutes by your own. In this step, don't read the sample essay, but you can apply whatever you can remember from the sample essay to your essays, like words, phrases, and sentences. (It is not shameful at all)
Step 3, Submit the essay to testbig to check out. After the essay submission, you can read the sample essay again and compare. You will understand the differences between the sample essays and your essays.
Step 4, After received the feedback from testbig, double check the flaws of the essay like grammar, structure issues. So don't repeat those issues in the future essays.
Step 5, Try to apply the tips you learned from this sample essay to the next one.
Step 6, Continue the step 1 to step 5 and you will find out the big improvement.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 10
No. of Words: 118 200
No. of Characters: 526 1000
No. of Different Words: 68 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.296 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.458 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.438 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 39 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 20 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.646 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.61 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.61 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.18 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4