People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
In nowadays, in metropolitan cities, most residents are affected more and more by air pollution, which causes them a series of health diseases. Although there are lots of contributing factors to this phenom, emissions released by cars is the main one as it will be explained below.
In most capital cities the center of the city is the most densely populated region due to the fact most public agencies, markets and monuments are typically located there. Therefore, most people choose to take their car, in order to reach the center of the city. This behavior, however, tends to increase the amounts of toxic fumes emitted on air, since cars are known for producing CO2 and other harmful particles that are responsible for asthma and even lung cancer.
The best course of action in terms of mitigating the above-mentioned problem suggests decreasing cars’ usage. This could be accomplished with two ways. First of all, local citizens and tourists should be encouraged to use public means of transportation, such as metro or bus vehicles, more and more. Secondly, the Ministry of Finance should levy a tariff with respect to ownership of cars. The imposition of extra taxes associated with cars would give lots of people an additional reason to stop using their cars and to take public transport. Recent surveys suggest that 60% of people living in the center of Athens have recently stopped using their cars due to the respective extra charges introduced by the local government.
In conclusion, the main reason responsible for air pollution is the extensive usage of cars in the center of cities. This could be avoided by encouraging citizens to take public transport and by imposing extra taxes pertaining to cars’ ownership.
- Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely Others think this is a waste of financial resources Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children them to do whatever they want Is this a good way to raise children What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 73
- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
In nowadays, in metropolitan cities, most residents...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71901430291 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8918020253 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164615046844 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561664005987 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457495527777 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100730238011 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190422366571 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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