Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately while others think it is more advantageous for children to study collectively. Discuss both view and give your opinion
Education is fundamental right of every individual. A host of individuals are in favour of co-education while others claim single sex education more better. This essay will articulate both views before reaching to conclusion.
On the unitary hand, co-education is a powerful weapon to root out the gender bias which is prevailing in our community since beginning of human civilization. This type of education provide women a platform to prove their mettle as a result of this they will rub shoulders with men. In addition to this, modern world is democratic and nobody ought to be deny from fundamental rights. For instance, Every democratic nation is giving similar education facility to both genders under same roof. Thus, co-education is symbol of equality for both generation.
On the other hand, In single sex education system gender based prejudiced has not any role. For example In these institutions girls can pursue science as a higher studies and boy can learn culinary skills. Therefore, single sex education provide access to both genders against traditional system of learning.
In conclusion, Although both sides are convincing, In my opinion, parents should have pioneer role about education of their child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35051546392 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85367826623 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1045767688 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22832669115 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807599881321 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432316663424 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135030898189 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022848109721 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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