taking a lot of time to make an important decision is viewed as a bad quality for a person to have. but now it is considered as a good quality
In today's convoluted and competitive world, it becomes highly charged and a widespread hot topic whether spending much time to make a great and important decision is a good quality of person or not. Therefore, some people are the leading proponents of claim that by consuming a lot of time, they are allowed to make a better decision. However, others take an opposite point of view and believe that a well-qualified and good person make a decision as soon as possible without spending much time. For this reason, if I have to face these two choices, I tend to choose the latter point. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence, one of the compelling reasons lending credence to stance taken above is that we are living in a sophisticated world, it order to achieve the success and seize the opportunities, people should make a quick decision. To elaborate it, needless to say that most great opportunities are missing by taking a host of time to make a great decision. Plus, from the market point of view, when people have problem and some needs in their lives, a good person or boss will make a fast decision to become prosperous. An example will illustrate this view point much better, I am living in Tehran where citizens are struggling with traffic jam and they are always concerning about miss their appointment. When one of my friends became aware of this problems, he made a quick decision and produce an application that shown people which route is the best to get their destination. I strongly believe that had my friend spent a great deal of his time on this problem, he could not have generated this application.
Apart from seizing the opportunity, another equally convincing point to justify my assertion is that so important has dependency been that human's being mind have been deeply involved with it from all over the world. One the one hand, some people believe that people can utilize others' experiences by the time they have and also consult with knowable people to make a great decision. On the other hand, some people strongly believe that people should take a responsibility for something in their lives and become independent to make a quick decision. I take the former viewpoint with a pinch of salt and claim that the latter viewpoint is much closer to the reality, for I do believe that the more people make their decision fast, they will not have adequate time to speak with others, and they have to make decision by themselves due to lack of time. By doing so, they can boost these characteristics which enable them to have better life style by being responsible.
To wrap it up, considering all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that nowadays, people can enrich their lives by making fast decision inasmuch as in the first place they can use the opportunity as soon possible before another take it, in the second place, they will become independent and responsible in their lives. What I am sure and helpful is that in the not too distant future people due to fast pace growing life, they will make their decision fast to take the several advantages of it. Make, for whereby, they can make an outstanding contribution to their society improve, and as a proverb says "the biggest room in the world, is the room for improvement" I firmly believe that it is prominent for us to help our society's breakthrough.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'orders'?
Suggestion: orders
...are living in a sophisticated world, it order to achieve the success and seize the op...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...ving in a sophisticated world, it order to achieve the success and seize the opportunities...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... When one of my friends became aware of this problems, he made a quick decision and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2844.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 593.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79595278246 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71749386095 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456998313659 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 901.8 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5643602139 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.684210526 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2105263158 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295309464053 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954712979855 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071577433704 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200322720053 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847480395951 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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