People usually mix their private and professional life What are the pros and cons

Essay topics:

People usually mix their private and professional life.What are the pros and cons?

One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s contemporary era is maintaining work-life balance. It is important to know about an individual strengths and weaknesses in their private and personal life. Although, expertise believe combining work and home life can be beneficial, others believe it can have negative impact. This essay will discuss, combinations of work and private life gives people a better understanding of an individual, and mixing professional and private life can be stressful.

Firstly, people’s behaviour is directly dependent on their social background. Private life gives an insight into people’s stability level and their ability to make profitable judgements. An individual’s real qualities can be determined at home, and it’s generally believed, people carry similar attitude at work. Such as, discipline, gratitude, organisation and diversity acceptance. With such qualities, It becomes easier to trust a person with high demanding positions. Thus, it can be said private life highlights qualities in human.

Secondly, some people live two different life. There behaviour and attitude varies from their actions, and such people are prone to make mistakes. It is important to have social and work boundaries, as its impossible to satisfy all aspects of life. Spending quality time with family and friends is important. Similarly, work requires singular focus to achieve success. Combing work and private life could be disastrous, as both require special care. Therefore, it can be said blending work and private life could be the recipe for disaster.

To conclude, this essay discussed why intermix of professional and personal life can highlight qualities in an individual and consolidating private and work life could result in failure. In my opinion, work should not be synthesised with personal life.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (10 votes)
Essay Categories

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y's contemporary era is maintaining work-life balance. It is important to kn...
^^
Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a better understanding of an individual, and mixing professional and private life...
^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... It is important to have social and work boundaries, as its impossible to satisfy...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66071428571 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10190650723 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5859516202 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7368421053 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258330584042 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905195854837 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760998112164 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180635783649 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037967414876 0.0609392437508 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 53.1260098522 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.