Some people think that schools should teach students to understand about right, wrong and good behaviour instead of this being only parents’ responsibility. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, learning moral issues are becoming crucial social life. It is argued by some that schools should have some moral courses at their curriculum moreover what children learn at home. I totally disagree with this idea I will state the reasons for my view.
First of all, students may learn many issues that conflicted with their religious. This is because always there are a few pupils who are from different religious. For example, many schools in Iran learn about islamic believes while students from other religions does not believe in Islam. As a result this could be a conflicting for families.
Another reason for my position is that children spend more time with their parents and Children can learn a lot of positive betaviour from their parents during whole day and in real situation. For instance, how parents behave in society can has good impact on their child s behavior. I think this method could be more practical than what they learn at school.
In conclusion, I agree strongly with that parents are only responsible for teaching morality to their children. This is because of some times parents do not believe in what schools learn about religious also they have more time for teaching right and wrong issues. Schools could have courses which teach parents how to learn moral issues to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31747173083 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575892857143 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4586162184 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6153846154 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251716650137 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098069486569 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586624547705 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160431095759 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539987819726 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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