Small businesses should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Hiring process designs considering lot of metrics to the each business, It's often discuss that, hiring young women will be a problem for small business when she go on a maternity leave. This essay will describes both pros and cons of taking young women as employers as employees.

On the one hand, Business loose productivity when employee goes on maternity leave. In addition to this, When employee back from leave, might she ask for some more leaves because of health checkups and taking care of her infant. In contrast to this, employees from peer group will suffer due to work load of this employee. For growing businesses its difficult to survive in this competition world with this kind of issues. Also, it's a challenge to find a temporary resource.

On the other hand, Young women employees are very productive when they get liberty from their employee. As per recent surveys, employees, who come back from maternity leaves are performing diligently. In addition to this, they are showing interest to continuing in company with feeling of their own. Once the employee feels it's their own company, employers will be more productive. Nowadays company's are following a trend like mothers returning programmes to get their employees back with providing babysitters and daycare facilities with in the office premises. due to this, mothers can see their child whenever they want and work more productively.

In conclusion, Young women taking maternity leave cause some discrepancy's. at the same time same employee can boost company productivity by suggesting new ideas and working towards company growth. As per me, small business companies should not focus on temporary problems as these employees are their future of success.

Votes
Average: 2.7 (3 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...e a problem for small business when she go on a maternity leave. This essay will d...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'describe'
Suggestion: describe
...o on a maternity leave. This essay will describes both pros and cons of taking young wome...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n world with this kind of issues. Also, its a challenge to find a temporary resourc...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...g of their own. Once the employee feels its their own company, employers will be mo...
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...facilities with in the office premises. due to this, mothers can see their child wh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...aternity leave cause some discrepancys. at the same time same employee can boost c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20714285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66085570094 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1370086234 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133877809792 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519077158566 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408275171332 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907390410822 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310066888311 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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