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Do you agree or disagree? parents are best teachers.
Parents are the first teachers to any child. The term 'best' is a superlative form of good, which means nothing can surpass it. However, not all parents care and support their children. Therefore, I confute the given statement because there are numerous cases reported on different parenting patterns. I would like to present three of such people like- child abusers, careless and over protective parents.
First, most of the children are found to imitate and mimic their parents actions at their very tender age. Their personality and psychological development begins at this point. A child fail...
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