When you are assigned an important for work or school, you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit everyday, or wait until you have a good idea about the presentation.
Everybody may be assigned to make a presentation in front of their schoolmates or coworkers, some people incline to prepare for the presentation when they receive the assignment because they could complete only a small portion of the presentation everyday and they do not need to worry about the deadline. Other individuals are willing to start their works until they get a fascinating idea. From my perspective, I would like to prepare the presentation as long as I know it and I think this could lead to good effects.
First, presentation is not an easy work so we may have some emergences during...
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Score: 28 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 572 350
No. of Characters: 2801 1500
No. of Different Words: 251 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.89 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.897 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 154 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 108 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 78 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 9.393 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.51 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.211 0.07
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