You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to companyComplaining about thisGiving your reasonsAsking for bill to be changed

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You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed

Dear sir,

I am Tejinder Kaur, a regular customer of your company. I am writing this letter to lodge a complaint regarding unnecessary charges in my phone bill.

Actually, I received the bill of last month early this morning. The total amount totally surprised me as it included surplus charges of a call abroad. The due payment is as high as Rs 5000/- which is not the correct amount.

Further, I would like to inform you that I have used this number (9888888888) for the sole purpose of local communication. After I checked the call details online, it displayed no history of such a call. Moreover, the phone was always in my possesion, so there is no chance of any other person making the call from my number.

I am really disappointed by such an error done by a reputed mobile company. I would like you to recheck the phone bill and send the right amount, so that I can make the payments by deadline.

Prompt action would be appreciated!

Yours sincerely,
Neha

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, moreover, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68208092486 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62169157821 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4063402981 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6363636364 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274640505816 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836186313684 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479632305338 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115326260892 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547478670485 0.0580467560999 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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