“As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious”
Knowledge is a set of facts, information and ideas that one receives with the help of education or through by experience. There a lot of people who argue that excessive knowledge could lead an individual to be left with unanswered questions and doubts, like the author. However, the sentiments expressed by the topic statement is not necessarily correct.
Knowledge has played a key role in the development of mankind over the course of history. It provided illumination on many matters that were considered to be strange and mysterious. For instance, in the primitive ages, where science was in its rudimentary form, our ancestors considered certain events such as rains, fire, and the stars and so on as mysterious and complex. They perceived these events in a spiritual way and worshipped these peculiar events. However, with the progress of time and with the increase of knowledge lead to understand these events from a scientific point of view. On the same line, stars and planets were considered to be just considered to be dots in the sky. This rudimentary view was challenged by maverick scientists whose knowledge changed the course of the world and explained these phenomena with scientific evidence that allowed people to understand and comprehend them. We build knowledge more and more upon knowledge that was previously gleaned. For instance, while building the first aero plane, the Wright Brothers had to go through several designs conceived by individuals over the years. This understanding provided them knowledge required to optimize their model, which made man’s desire to fly possible.
However, it is also true that acquiring knowledge in abundance could make things complex and incomprehensible to man. In today’s world, where sophisticated tools are easily available, we are constantly bombarded with information. These tools involve newspapers, internet, and posters and so on. While a ton of information is gained every day, it is pertinent to check the authenticity of these information’s. Excess of knowledge could lead to what is known as “information load”. This is a situation wherein, an individual is unable to comprehend the information’s. Excess of knowledge impairs an individual’s comprehension of certain matters and ability to make informed decisions. Therefore, it is to be understood that more knowledge cannot lead to more comprehension. However influx of authentic knowledge could lead to make matters simple and comprehensible.
It is to be understood that knowledge has no end. It is while discovering and acquiring new knowledge, we realize that we have tapped only the surface of the wealth of knowledge waiting to be discovered. For instance, the beginning to the nineteenth century lead to various medical advancements that cured drastic diseases that plagued the human life for centuries. This knowledge motivated researchers and scientists to gain more knowledge on the human body in order to lead a comfortable life. For instance, there have been reported cases of lung replacements which were considered impossible by humans a century ago. Similarly, the knowledge of various engines lead to development of automobiles. Knowledge of electric motors lead to the development of electric cars that proved to be the future of transportation while being fuel efficient and more over environmental friendly. Therefore, the more we acquire knowledge, the more we comprehend things and more complex matters waiting to be unveiled.
To conclude, knowledge is the key player in the development of mankind by making things comprehensible. Acquiring it has led to groundbreaking inventions that were considered impossible. However, while acquiring knowledge, one has to ensure its authenticity as the constant influx of unauthentic knowledge could lead to more confusion and hinder the growth of humankind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a spiritual way" with adverb for "spiritual"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd complex. They perceived these events in a spiritual way and worshipped these peculiar events. H...
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Line 3, column 802, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...edge cannot lead to more comprehension. However influx of authentic knowledge could lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3287.0 2235.4752809 147% => OK
No of words: 601.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46921797005 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28686654501 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46921797005 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 1032.3 704.065955056 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.551910075 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6060606061 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2121212121 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25430847599 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698013392915 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113647094608 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149800639064 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906049316716 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 100.480337079 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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