You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Hi Amit,

I want to say thank you for the hospitality you do on vacations. It was a fun and, a memorable trip. Now, I feel that it was a right decision to spend our holidays together at your place. I like interior as well as location of your house. Really, it was pleasant stay.

However, as you know that none of our trip finish with having any problem. A problem free trip is not our cup of tea. I'm writing to say that I'm forget my wallet at your home because of the hurry to catch the train. It will be in your TV room, where I took credit card from it to book my tickets. Please check the table at the corner. It is very precious to me as it is a gift from my uncle.

It'd be great if you can find it and parcel to me at my hostel address. But, make sure to cross check address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it. Also, do not forget to pack it properly.

Please get back me as soon as possible.

See you soon!

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
...oblem free trip is not our cup of tea. Im writing to say that I forget my wallet ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook my tickets Please check the table at the corner. It is very precious to me as...
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Suggestion: some
...heck address before writing it down, as some of the important documents are in it. Also, do...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he important documents are in it. Also, dont forget to pack it properly. Please g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, i feel, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 5.60731707317 678% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 3.99479166667 4.92477711251 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11480781854 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5902386307 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1333333333 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24408870036 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726107010358 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792614452108 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113327933421 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080107023961 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 13.2329268293 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 61.2550243902 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.97 11.4140731707 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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