the article talks about the benefits of genetic modification of the trees an bring three reasons of support. however, the professor opposes this idea by rejecting each reason and bring specific example for her rejections.
First, the reading passages claim that genetic modification can increase the trees self-defense against ringspot Viruses. the professor states that also this way might be good for individual problems, but due to changes that happen to their genetic structure, they are not able to compatible themselves with other kinds of changing like climate changing, new pesticides which are going to use for them or some new insects. because modified trees are made for an individual situation not resistant to the different conditions. while unmodified one isn't like this.
Second, the reading states that farmers by using this genetically modified trees can have more fruit. because they grow faster and it would be a great investment for them. but the professor into the contrary said that if farmers want to use such this modified seeds, they have to pay costs of them to the laboratory where has been made.also, after the cultivation again by the law they have to pay the yearly costs of that. thus, it wouldn't be an efficient method for them
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Third, the passage said that these Genetically modified trees help wild habitant be far away of declination. the professor opposes this idea by saying that. this way not only doesn't help the maintenance of the wild trees but also it causes an aggressive competition among modified and unmodified trees.in order to catch more waters, light, and soil to grow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06097560976 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54830562559 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.256353852 49.2860985944 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41511021281 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16014440743 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861657180936 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235999521915 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068874207049 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.