The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the charts that illustrate how much electricity was produced in two countries by each fuel source in 1980 and 200.
To begin with, in Australia, the leading role in electricity production belonged to coal (50units) and the rest of electricity was generated using natural gas (20units), hydro power (20units), and oil (10units) in 1980. In 2000 coal preserved its place at top rising by 80 units, while the amount of hydro power in this process also increased reaching to 36 units and the usage of oil and natural gas respectively dropped by 18units and 8units.
When it comes to Fran...
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