Marriage is a very important topic globally. When a person starts a new job, or a woman gets into her twenties, everyone around them seems to be concerned about finding a life partner for them. Everyone suddenly assumes a role of a matchmaker, but no one really takes into consideration the opinion of that person if he/she is ready for marriage. I believe, one should marry at an older age for a variety of reasons that I will explore in the following paragraphs.
In my opinion, marriage requires that both partners be mature enough to attain the responisbility and share this bond for lifetime. This maturity is attained as one gets older. With age, comes the wisdom and experience. Our point of views change as we grow old from a variety of experiences and challenges that we face in life. For eg: My cousin got married at a very early age to a girl who was younger to him. I have seen them both fight over petty issues like not having cleaned the restroom or not caring for their children. I feel like once we are older, it comes to us naturally and we can support and help our partner in all the tasks.
When marrying at an older age, it means that no new risks will be taken and that the individual is more stable in life. It also implies that the person has some bank balance and is independent and good at decision making. It brings a sense of stability to the married life. Also, having kids at an older age is a benefit. Being a good parent involves a lot of responsibility and patience. I beleive, as one ages, one can take good responsibility of their kids as compared to having kids at a younger age as people are still struggling to be financially stable in their life.
Thus, in my opinion, marrying at an older age is more advantageous than marrying at a younger age.
- TPO-17 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.70
- Compare the advantages of marrying at young age to marrying at an older age. State and support your preference.60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...has some bank balance and is independent and good at decision making. It brings a...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, thus, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47112462006 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60928396692 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1966452548 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7222222222 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354746986744 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120964059853 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150962035106 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27853950441 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175568025796 0.0645574589148 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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