There are so many areas still unknown in the scientific area, as human-beings we are still in the procerdure of exploiting both of the world and outerspace. Thirty years has gone, our frist ejected exploiting satellite "travller I" juts flied out of our Solar system recently with the chipset which cannot compete with the one in our cellphone. This satellite almost means nothing to our daily life as it has flied so far away, but the NASA made a significant bennifit to the whole world by the messages stored in the disc with the satellite , which can send information to outerspace culture to inform the existence of human.My opionion concurs with the NASA that it is meaningful to make this unclear expriment.
Firstly, in the scientific research, there are seldom areas that we are totally comprehensive with.After learning math for eighteen years, I got shocked by the fact the sum of all natural integers is a negative number -1/12. It's amazing and exhilarating when I initially knew this result. Our scientists have developed a large math realm, there is still theoies and equantions unknown in this area.That is what make us addicted by the charm of science with uncertainty and mythterious.
Secondly, without the help of the government, some of the research will not keep on developing merely by scientists. The big telecope which can exploring the outerspace need a spacious area to be built on and cost great sum of money. There's a large cycle big molecular lab underground in Europe with a length over 30 kilometers, this big loop will provide a safe and effectve place for physist to research how to use and control nuclear power , in addtion , it may create a little black hole for researching in certain conditions. Likewise, this research also contributed by the Euro Union , which will benefit the whole human by the results still unclear now.
Thirdly, the governments' management instead of merely funding is essential for scientific research when comes to an unclear area. Due to the development of clone technology, this area has brought about various sounds from supporting and opposing, it is true that people varied in the use of clone technoloy which may violate morality. So this is the time for the Goverments to show musclue to regulate the research in a proper way which can benefit the human mostly.
In conclusion, I think the governments should play an more important rule in scientific research with fund and administration. Funding the unknown area is not unneccesary, but it should be undercontrolled by the government's management.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06088992974 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89878200411 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550351288056 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8945598422 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.066666667 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4666666667 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198498918521 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733339621049 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496366019731 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123230124269 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462933420171 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.