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Describe the bar chart given below illustrating the percentages of the Internet users between males and females in 2008
Given is the chart providing statistical information about the proportion of males and females who used the Internet for different purposes in 2008. We can immediately see that all people preferred the Internet to check their e-mails. It is also apparent that the largest gender gap was observed in terms of getting information about health and goods, services.
According to the chart, it is clear-cut that males slightly surpassed their female counterparts in case of using e-mail (99% opposed to 98%). The similar pattern can be observed in playing online games which was 70% and 68 % for males ...
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