With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How can old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
Internet and mobile technology in the Twenty First Century is a blessing with people getting access to anything and everything handy. Younger generation adaptability to latest application is seamless. However, old generations accustomed to telegraphs, postal technologies are struggling to cope up with next generation technologies. Realization of technology usage in day-to-day activities needs familiarized along with usage rules for effective use.
Old technologies referring to telephone, telegraphs and postal communications swiftly transitioned to newer generation posing a great challenge for old people to adopt, which is note the case for younger generation as the old technologies have become obsolete.
Wide variety of mobile applications serving day-to-day needs involving banking transactions, commuting facilities, social media, voice over internet calls, re-union of alumni members, religious and social entertainments are some of the widely accessible application which are of much help in daily routines.
With technology advancement, built in mobiles features having linguistic capability which enables regional language support, sleek and handy operators, reduced dependency with family members for religious and social gatherings, low-cost tariffs, shopping online are key differentiation to inspire old generation for latest technologies.
In Summary, although old generations are less accustomed to new technologies involving internet and mobile, new technologies has vast coverage, helping day-to-day needs for old generation. New technology definitely has positive impact to get inspired.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Twenty-First
Internet and mobile technology in the Twenty First Century is a blessing with people getti...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
... handy. Younger generation adaptability to latest application is seamless. However, old g...
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Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs familiarized" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'familiarizing' or 'to be familiarized'.
Suggestion: familiarizing; to be familiarized
...gy usage in day-to-day activities needs familiarized along with usage rules for effective us...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...religious and social entertainments are some of the widely accessible application which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 20.9802955665 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.38636363636 5.00649968141 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29418157232 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.57093596059 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.6751189969 50.4703680194 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.111111111 104.977214359 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214075863215 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908189015373 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645338018154 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122114737308 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560491125071 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 12.6369458128 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 53.1260098522 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.9458128079 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.08 11.5310837438 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.