Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the advantages and disadvantages of hosting sporting events in a particular country. While some people argue that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages, on my point of view countries can experience myriad of advantages by hosting international events in a particular country. In this essay, I shall discuss factors in strengthening my argument while analyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, countries can improve their infrastructure according to international standards with the funds allocated by the international agencies. For example, countries can build sports stadiums and villages to host these sports persons. In addition, people of that country can generate some income by selling items to this huge population and even governments can promote their country to other destinations.
On the other hand, some people does not like this initiative on the basis of exposing their country to tourists may give various adverse affects to it's population. For instance, they think that there is a possibility of spreading dangerouse diseases from these tourists. Moreover, some cultures do not encourage for sports such as muslim countries. Therefore, they do not have any interest towards this cause.
In conclusion, it is recommended that developing countries should compete in taking sponsorship for these kinds of events to upgrade their countries quality of infrastructure and this will also help to stimulate younger generations in taking part in sporting events. This initiative would help to maintain a healthy population with a proper mental health as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55335968379 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09228359196 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.266972748 50.4703680194 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184379441578 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739202197778 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486562423566 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109431733042 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243236901981 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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