Both charts illustrate the number of marriages and divorces which happen over the span of thirty years in the USA between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Essay topics:

Both charts illustrate the number of marriages and divorces which happen over the span of thirty years in the USA between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Despite having a stable number of marriages in 1970 and 1980 (2.5 million cases), the citizens experienced a gradual decrease to 2 million in 2000. Meanwhile, the number of divorces in the country remained stable in 1 million case over 1979 and 2000, although in 1980 the case reached its highest point about 1.4 million, which was only about 0.3 million higher than the divorces number in 1990.

Around 70% and 60% of American couples were united in a legal marriage in both years, making the number of marriages only has a slight decrease over the three decades period. In contrast, the marriage split-up showed insignificant number of less than 10% in each year. Subsequently, in the intervening period, people who were not married witnessed a slight increase from 15% to 20%.

In general, the charts above show the moderate drop in the marriage number from 1970 to 2000, while the divorces remained stable. More than half of American adults were married in both years and only small population choose to separate from their spouses.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94857142857 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46269140974 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2254687426 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27557541004 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122166856712 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06088658185 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181170907613 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330546186072 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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