in some countries levels of health and fin=tnesss are decreasing and average weights are increasing.
what do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?
the people of some countries are gaining weight and losing health and fitness level. unhealthy lifestyle is responsible for this, and awareness programme by the government as well as a few steps by the employers can help to mitigate this issue. this essay is going to describe that.
the most obvious reason for poor health and overweight is lack of exercise. this is because most of the people living in some countries are leading a sedentary lifestyle because of the nature of their work. people work for long shifts, thereby leaving them no time for exercise. for instance, a recent survey took the opinion of five thousand people in Dhaka, and 82% of them replied they do not exercise due to lack of time and tiredness because of their ling haul shifts.
to combat this problem, the most obvious step should be awareness programmes by the government. the government should use its state media to broadcast the adverse effect of obesity as well as encourage people to spare some time for their health. furthermore, as the problem is initiating from the workplace, the employers have to something about it. they should allow specific time for the employees for exercise between the work schedule. for example, dedicating an hour of time for the employees for exercise is going to allow them to exercise, thereby keeping themselves feet.
in conclusion, health and work both are important for us, and we have to achieve a balance between these two where help from the government and the employers can play a vital role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90733590734 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55215567828 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517374517375 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8521568749 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093659015817 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447304708767 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675342112175 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653007307989 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276216970062 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.