Some people argue that public should be allowed to have guns Others do not agree Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Some people argue that public should be allowed to have guns. Others do not agree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Having a gun have been a crucial debate in terms of its benefits and drawbacks. while there is indeed a security pros that comes with guns in home, some safety risks would be much more than benefits. In my point of view, we couldn’t contend any of them without pay attention to occasional circumstances.

On the one hand keep a gun in the home give the owner a real sense of security. In some dangerous areas such as remote places which don’t enjoy official guarding, people could keep a gun in their home if they take the proper precautions. When they properly store their guns it can be a gre...

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Having a gun have been a crucial debate
Having a gun has been a crucial debate

we couldn't contend any of them without pay attention to occasional circumstances.
we couldn't contend any of them without paying attention to occasional circumstances.

On the one hand keep a gun in the home give the owner a real sense of security.
On the one hand, keeping a gun in the home gives the owner a real sense of security.

Sentence: Likewise in the above discussion is assumed that there no official ban for having gun by ordinary people.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.404 4.6
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