Politicians have a tremendous effect on both nation and country therefore, that they have to carry very important characteristics in their personality. The importance of these qualities can be seen in successful and well developed countries. In my view, a politician have to have the qualities of declamation, commitment, being well educated about his/her serving area. My opinion is based on the following explanations.
First, politicians are representing their nation and country to the others. In order to hear the societies problems, make innovations, change an on going system, protest a problem or someone, they have to be expert about oratory. Because, if a politician can not express the things he/she want to or himself accurately, then there is no point to wait for a feed back or support. Communities tension can not be the same all the time thus a politician must have a control on his/her words to impress the group that he/she talks to.
Another quality which carries great importance is that a politician have to be well educated in his/her working area. Because, in order to solve a problem in that area, to find new creative solutions, to make his/her tasks unquestionable and quickly, to make well decisions and lastly to be able to serve his/her country in the best way, a politician must have a degree from a good collage. For instance, a person who does not have any information about technology can not be a leader in this area. For this reason, a task must be done by an expert to take good actions.
Last but not least, a politician have to be really commitment to his/her country. Because, only this love can make one try to do their best and enhance the politicians abilities of improvement. If a person burns with the love of serving the country, then that person do not act in a selfish way and do not use any source he/she have for his/her own desires. That is the most significant quality in my opinion and the other qualities can not be meaningful without this one.
In summary, a politician must be a person who has a degree from his/her serving area, is able to resonate with the community and carry the love of country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th the love of serving the country, then that person do not act in a selfish way ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a selfish way" with adverb for "selfish"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77866666667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81844590747 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4797151824 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961708504821 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411954976801 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275890771475 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624037297359 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208805191866 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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