You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it. Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter, introduce yourself; explain what went wrong with the car you rented; ask for some form of compensation.

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You rented a car recently, but were not satisfied with it. Write a letter of complaint to the rental agency. In your letter, introduce yourself; explain what went wrong with the car you rented; ask for some form of compensation.

Dear Sir or Madam,

May name is David Zhang- a customer of your company who rented a car from your company recently. I am writing to lodge a complaint regarding to an unsatisfying service provided by your company last week.

I have rented a car from your company last Friday for a long journey planned during last weekend. I asked for a vehicle which was completely reliable to make sure that I could accomplish my target fully planned. And your staff promised me a dependable car could be provided as I required. However, it was just over 2 two hours since I departed, the engine of the car was ...

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