TPO 37 Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In fact, planing the works which should be done has turned into a controversial issue during recent decades as far as many companes even recruited expert in order to distinct the most appropriarte tasks which have to be done in the first priority. In my piont of view people perefer to do two kinds of things including intertainment and works that contribute them to achive goals ; therefore, I myself believe that people's plan are definitely differant when they encounter with each kind. people would rather to decline the number of things which are done in high quality in the firs sitiation; moreover, on the contrary they like to participate in many funny things.
Actually, in ordet the second kind of workgoal is counted as an vital factor that people orgnize ther works accordig to it. Althogh a vast majority of people like to take advantages of a host number of works, logically they completely focus on the most significant work that helps them to be successful; indeed, the reason of selecting special work not only isn't lack of time but also is the value of time that people don't want to spend it on unwealthu tasks. On the other hand, prosperity can be gained when people do work in high quality, hence, selecting specific things is logical and rational.
Indeed,it is hard to ignore the fact that people nowadays don't have enough time for enjoyable tings such as trips, parties, etc. they lose alot of throughout doing other essential works; besides, the time is wasted in crowded place. For instance, I have been losting my time everyday when i am going to work and backing that does't let me to allocate a specific time to extra intresting activity such as watching film or spending ime with friends; actually, both limitation of time and the importance of aims confine us to a finite frame.
Generaly, I believe that the fewer quantity the higher quality. For example employers assign feser that three work to each worker or students' homework have decreased conciderably in comparissin past; nonetheless, one cannot neglect the fact that in such blusting world people unconsiously face the lack of time in their time; thus, they are obliged to eliminate some works which have less priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89095744681 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56329784012 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5883986807 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.181818182 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1818181818 20.6045352989 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0909090909 5.45110844103 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147455554471 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617832680828 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523117748779 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887628363609 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409883475732 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 11.7677419355 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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