In this day and time, it is evident that technology is rapidly being used in the entire sector in order to monitor the activity of individualism. Monitering devices such as cellphone tracking and security cameras are found everywhere but in many cases, folks are unconscious about this development. In my opinion, I think this development aid to overshadow the determenral side of application of such technology. This essay would discuss two advantages and one disadvantages.
The major benifits are demoralised the people from involving in criminal activity and to act as a foundation of security purpose. Despite of high human security , different instituation and company are being robbed, after implementing security devices such as CCTV helps to catch culprits as well as help to provide some confidential evidence. The creativity of felon on criminal activity updated day by day which leads towards less probability of catching up so, when such device are installed, may be criminal leaked some evidence so that easy to take action. For instance, recently India developed a technology which can track the truth which become means to reach the reality.
In other hand, while utilizing such technology in inappropriate place that hazards the issue of confidencial as well as destroy the personal life. The intension of every person is not same which create the critical situation leaked the immortal activity on society. For example, via CCTV culprits catured the unnessary video of personal.
In conclusion, Every technology has its both advantages as well as disadvantages. The misuse of such technology ruined society but applying in a better way becomes helpful while catching person who involved in criminal activity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... purpose. Despite of high human security , different instituation and company are ...
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Line 4, column 37, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...l. In conclusion, Every technology has its both advantages as well as disadvantage...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...very technology has its both advantages as well as disadvantages. The misuse of such techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35661764706 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98157247945 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3440496674 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180917486423 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603114526194 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501287740922 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981121800574 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711705720468 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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