Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advantages and disadvantages of computer games have been a controversial issue in the community lately. Whereas some people claim that computer games have some significant risks others maintain that they constitute several undeniable benefits. Although both sides have several pros and cons, I am not of the opinion that computer games is a waste of time. That offers numerous benefit, it should not be ignored. I will elucidate the details of my beliefs with some tangible details and examples in the following paragraphs.
In the modern world, parents face serious risks and potentials. Computer games is adhere whether use good aim or false. Parents have some options to control children. Children access to unlimited information world while they play games. Computer games aim to aid independent teaching. İt includes multi faced options which are audio and video. When children use audio and video, they have multiple learning possibilities. For instances, science people carry out a research including computer games. They offer surprising results. Children have more ability to learn than not play games.
Second point, whether children participant or not in school. Children play computer games more interested than other students in the school. They tend to attend lessons. They know to study under stressful conditions. Because some games contain significant phase to overcome it.
Lastly, children have higher adaptability in the changing world . They are more speed and creative thanks to computer games. Although parents believe that it has negative effects about the children evolution. Children dream games in the memory, and they tend to build over world in somewhere. They create own world. But parents must carefull about dreams. Because children may lose her perception of reality.
To sum up, computer games have several positive effects. Children are improved via games. They do not aware of this in oder to improving mental ability and skilful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, may, second, so, whereas, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47231270358 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59889567476 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9958116285 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.0 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.2333333333 20.6045352989 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.43333333333 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196889419374 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514233252759 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432735798703 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113518304068 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306821715629 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 58.1214874552 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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