Equal and impartial Laws are people's sanctuary for natural justice. laws and regulations provide the framework of any society or institution. they draw the lines of what is acceptable and what is not acceptable. In addition, they represent the cultural beliefs and traditions within a certain society. without strict, comprehensive and impartial laws people become susceptible to injustice, chaos, and doom. the question of the rigidity of the law considering the circumstances, time and place an instance might occur remains unresolved. personally, I believe that some laws should be more flexible to take into account the aforementioned variables.
First and foremost, the frequency or rarity of a certain crime is correlated with the severity of its punishment. multiple pieces of evidence that are indicative of what can be seen within various social groups. starting with children at school, if the school law system is strict against skipping classes or submitting homework, the frequency of children not submitting their homework or skipping classes decreases dramatically. Even though the punishment can only be a harsh reprimand or chastise. this can also be seen throughout various corporates or institutions.
It is out of the question that Laws regarding major sins and crimes should never be mitigated or made more flexible. the circumstances time and place regarding these crimes are irrelevant. for instance, A murder, no matter what the reasons or circumstances behind it may be, must always be severely punished by law. any set of circumstances or places is extraneous to this case, consequently, they can never justify murder. similarly major crimes like, rape, hate crimes or major treason must also never be tolerated. flexible laws in these types of crimes might give the chance for a shrewd lawyer to find a loophole or manipulate the judge for a mollified sentence.on the contrary, some Laws regarding less critical matters can be more carefully analyzed. the final sentence is left for the assessment of the judge depending on his analysis of the case. for example, a judge might allow convicts of traffic law violations or in some scarce cases robbery to make these violations with impunity, if the circumstances, time or place forced them into such actions.
looking at this matter from a different perspective, it is clear that in some cases, flexible laws might actually allow for improvements in current laws. the ways competitive teams prevaricate and manipulate situations for their advantage inconsequently allow lawmakers to see matters more clearly as of where they can enhance current laws to be more watertight. this can be seen in competitive sports or scientific fields like formula 1 racing. In the mid-'80s a LOTUS Formula One team took advantage of a loophole in the Aerodynamics section of the F1 regulations, granting them the chance to brilliantly design a device that allows them to generate downforce that was much higher than the current designs were able to generate at the time. however, at such high downforce Lotus's cars were able to achieve extreme speeds, which is extremely dangerous, Forcing F1 lawmakers to update and improve their regulations on a regular basis. While the F1 banned these devices eventually, it allowed Aerodynamicists to try to create some workarounds engendering the rise of the modern Aerodynamics.
in light of all the aforementioned it is clear that the question fo how flexible laws should be is not an easy one to answer, neither can it be answered collectively. but rather laws should let judges study each unique case independently and thoroughly due to the impracticality of modifying laws according to every possible circumstance place or time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3139.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 596.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26677852349 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04379388396 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521812080537 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1002.6 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5407059352 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.107142857 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.03571428571 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222383341445 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619993253127 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600352384655 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136655302411 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060466685058 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 100.480337079 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.