Many people spend a lot of time using communication technology. What are the reasons for this? What is the impact with their families and other people?
In this technological revolutionary world, daily there is announcement of new inventions of communication devices and new products releasing in the market. Due to easy access and cheaper prices allure people to buy the communication devices which enables using it for long time. There are both positive and negative effects on the family relationship by using more time on these devices.
People in work need to spend more time on communication technologies like mobiles and internet. For example, companies need effective relationship with the client and interact with them in online by sending em...
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daily there is announcement of new inventions
daily there is an announcement of new inventions
Due to easy access and cheaper prices allure people to buy the communication devices which enables using it for long time.
Due to easy access and cheaper prices, it allures people to buy the communication devices which enable to use it for a long time.
Communicating with customers effectively which helps to know the customer service feedback.
Communicating with customers effectively helps to know the customer service feedback.
it’s everyone duty
it’s everyone's duty
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
a lot of 'result in' in the essay.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 330 350
No. of Characters: 1775 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.262 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.379 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.873 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 137 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.412 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.202 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.085 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5