The bar charts illustrate the alterations and differences in the average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.

Essay topics:

The bar charts illustrate the alterations and differences in the average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.

The pie charts compare 4 typical meals consumed in the USA in terms of the amount of 3 unhealthy nutrients: sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in average.

Overall, breakfast contains the least amount of 3 unhealthy substances. In addition, dinner is represented with the largest proportion of sodium and saturated fat.

The largest proportion of sodium and saturated fat is witnessed in dinner, with 43% and 37% respectively, while only 23% of added sugar was in dinner. Whereas, Snacks is represented the largest percentage of added sugar with 42%, which double than the amount of saturated fat with 21% and only 14% of sodium.

The percentage of all 3 substances are the sam in breakfast. added sugar and saturated fat each account for 16%, which is higher slightly than the figure for sodium (14%). in terms of Lunch meal, the proportion of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar are 29%, 26% and 19% accordingly.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13548387097 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73984740227 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490322580645 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9198326138 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387717058708 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180180184862 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123646596289 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262782483502 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120869670831 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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