The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed fives portions of fruits and vegetable per day in the England from 2001 to 2008.
Overall, it is obvious that while the amount of women consumer has the highest ratio, the figure for children shows the modest number. It is also noticeable that all the figures increased respectively during the first 6 years then started to decreased in the last 2 years
Looking at the bar chart in details, the figure for women shows the highest amount compared to the other two. While the women chart hits its peak at about 35% in 2006, the children’s lowest figure is merely 13% in 2001,2002 and 2003.Looking at the chart in another details, the ratio of fruit and vegetable consumers increased respectively then started to drop in the last 2 years. In the first 3 years, the men and children’s chart remain level-off at about 12% for children and 17% for men. The chart of women however, increased gradually throughout the first 6 years then slowly decline in the last 2 years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Looking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80110497238 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67818498741 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0765601102 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.833333333 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2125944443 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129283054356 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179269212468 0.0843802449381 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21609837161 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220996794671 0.0819641961636 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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