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Both the writer and lecturer mention about altruism, opposite term of selfishness, in animal and human behaviors.While the writer states humans and animals practice it unconditionally, the lecturer clarifies altruism is behaved due to personal needs.
First and foremost, the writer illustrates unselfish acts in humans by exemplifying individuals being donors to their relatives or complete strangers without personal interests.The lecturer ,yet refutes it by illustrating that donors, in reality, acquire reward by donor receiver or relative in return of their actions,such as sense of confidence.
Secondly,the writer sheds light on meerkat, a mammal kind, altruism behaviors by instantiating their contributions to their group.Meerkats act as guardian, protecting other meerkats from predators while they are hunting food, notify them about approaching danger and put themselves in danger being the first alerter.The lecturer, however, fails to agree by making evidence-based point that meerkats don’t,actually,expose themselves to any danger being the first notifier, instead, gains the ability to escape first since they noticed the danger before others.
Thirdly,the writer notes that guardian meerkats assist their group members without a reward and even be deprived of eating with other members while guarding.Conversely,the lecturer disagrees by reporting scientific studies that meerkats eat prior guarding and assist with full stomach.Therefore,don’t sacrifice anything, instead eat before others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...fishness, in animal and human behaviors.While the writer states humans and animals pr...
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...te strangers without personal interests.The lecturer ,yet refutes it by illustratin...
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... without personal interests.The lecturer ,yet refutes it by illustrating that dono...
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...r or relative in return of their actions,such as sense of confidence. Secondly,the ...
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...,such as sense of confidence. Secondly,the writer sheds light on meerkat, a mammal...
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...ting their contributions to their group.Meerkats act as guardian, protecting other meer...
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...oup.Meerkats act as guardian, protecting other meerkats from predators while they...
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...elves in danger being the first alerter.The lecturer, however, fails to agree by ma...
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...nce-based point that meerkats don't,actually,expose themselves to any danger being t...
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...ating with other members while guarding.Conversely,the lecturer disagrees by reporting sci...
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...r guarding and assist with full stomach.Therefore,don't sacrifice anything, instead ...
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...g and assist with full stomach.Therefore,don't sacrifice anything, instead eat befor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, conversely, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24644549763 5.08290768461 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.82583947459 2.5805825403 148% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 21.2450331126 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.096698476 49.2860985944 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 329.5 110.228320801 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.75 21.698381199 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06452816374 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.3589403974 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 53.8541721854 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.0289183223 235% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.86 12.2367328918 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.05 8.42419426049 143% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.498013245 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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