Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change.
changing the lifestyle of people who live in developed country is not a top priority for current situation of solving global climate problem.
First, it is hardly promising to contain the climate change by reducing the energy consumption of people. lifestyle is rooted in our personality and cannot been changed immediately. And it is the large amounts of gases such as carbon dioxide, not the energy consumed, that caused the climate change. Although energy is highly related to carbon dioxide pollution, energy can be used safely when generated in clean ways such as solar and wind energy. What's more,even if reducing energy consumption can efficiently slow the procedure of global warming, the difficulty we met when trying to quantify the damage caused by energy-consuming activity make this argument less practical. For example, it is not sure how much energy will be consumed when we open our PC and watch a piece of video on the internet. because we don't know how many computation have been made to supply an intellectual daily recommendation for us, and how many servers are running to make sure that we can watch this video anywhere at any time, the energy behind a simple click could be huge. So reducing energy consumption is neither likely to be effective--because it's an indirect cause--nor likely to be practical.
Second, global climate change is not only because of developed country. Instead, developing country like China is also a major carbon dioxide producer. climate change is a global issue requires collaborate efforts. it is not likely to contain the change successfully until the majority of countries are persuaded to make a change.
Furthermore, the international company as well as big factory which consumes huge quantities of energy, is vital to climate change. The solution to them, however, is switching to a environmental friendly industry system by technological innovation.
Indeed, change of lifestyle could lead to a more sustainable environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26018808777 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00935214166 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564263322884 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2946878277 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297698366428 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107834382308 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857271115138 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185640554308 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988506430855 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.