The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany France Italy and Auistria between 1995 and 2005

Essay topics:

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany,France,Italy and Auistria between 1995 and 2005.

The line graph compares figures of money spent on Books for four countries(Germany,France,Italy6Austria) over a period of 10 years.
Overall, it is clear that by far the most popular means country Germany money spent on Books throughout the period shown.Also, while spend on books who use France and Auistria increase gradually, the spent on Books of Italy users falls steadily.
In 1195, 80 million dollars money spent on Books by Germany on a daily basis,while the France,Italy and Austria were used by abourt 55 million dollars and 30 million dollars money spent on Books respectively.
In the year 1999, money spent on Books of Germany rose to 90 million dollars and in France to 60 000000 $ and in Italy to 50 000000 $ and Austria to 40 000 000 $(It is highest 10 000 000 $ than in 1995).
By 2005, money spent on Books by Germany is expected to reach almost 100 million dollars, and in France users also predicted to rise, to nearly 75 000 000 $ and in Italy increase slowly approximately 65 000 000 $ Auistria increase gradualy to about 71 million dollars money spent on Books.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , France
...spent on Books for four countriesGermany,France,Italy6Austria over a period of 10 years...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...nt on Books throughout the period shown.Also, while spend on books who use France an...
^^^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ent on Books by Germany on a daily basis,while the France,Italy and Austria were used ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Italy
...ermany on a daily basis,while the France,Italy and Austria were used by abourt 55 mill...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000000'.
Suggestion: $000000
... 90 million dollars and in France to 60 000000 $ and in Italy to 50 000000 $ and Austria...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000000'.
Suggestion: $000000
...rance to 60 000000 $ and in Italy to 50 000000 $ and Austria to 40 000 000 is highest 1...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to 50 000000 $ and Austria to 40 000 000 is highest 10 000 000 $ than in 1995. B...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ustria to 40 000 000 is highest 10 000 000 $ than in 1995. By 2005, money spent on ...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...lso predicted to rise, to nearly 75 000 000 $ and in Italy increase slowly approximat...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: CURRENCY[2]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ly increase slowly approximately 65 000 000 $ Auistria increase gradualy to about 71 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78494623656 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39008368863 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494623655914 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1089446327 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.0 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 22.9334400587 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377704632006 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219262131995 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486179349353 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219262131995 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486179349353 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.2329268293 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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