Advantages and disadvantges of watching TV on children

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Advantages and disadvantges of watching TV on children.

Nowadays, TV is one of the most popular entertainments in most families. And some people think that TV effects on us, especially children. I think that TV has both good and bad sides for children and it has good more than bad. In this essay, I will look at both positive and negative sides that TV effects on children’s life.

Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of watching TV. One of the main positives is that TV offers a wide range of entertainment for children in their free time. Children sometimes get studying pressure in school and pressure from their parents. They can watch fun ...

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TV effects on us
TV affects on us

Sentence: I think that TV has both good and bad sides for children and it has good more than bad.
Description: The fragment has good more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace good with adverb

they can not only improve their English skills but also can learn
they can not only improve their English skills but also learn

watching TV have some disadvantages
watching TV has some disadvantages

Sentence: It is obviously that TV is an important part in children's life.
Description: The fragment is obviously that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace obviously with adjective

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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.423 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.059 7.5

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